tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6922161292779305181.post294411092674660886..comments2023-03-25T23:40:49.630-07:00Comments on Human Rights Student Interaction: Final paper for Human Rights and World PoliticsStan Staryginhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00960159815221006813noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6922161292779305181.post-31401846003726656132007-09-11T03:09:00.000-07:002007-09-11T03:09:00.000-07:00Review: Dara,It is a well-structured essay, howeve...Review: <BR/><BR/>Dara,<BR/><BR/>It is a well-structured essay, however, there are a few things that need to be mentioned. When you talk about the restrictions on demonstrations imposed by the RGC following the anti-Thai riots in 2003, these restrictions don't suspect the right to freedom of expression, but the right to assembly. I suppose it is possible to make an argument by linking the right to assembly to the right to freedom of expression, thus, showing how these rights are interrelated and how the suspension of one of them adversely affected the free exercise of the other. I don't see an argument for this link in this paper. Two, too much time in this paper was dedicated to listing cases of violation of the right to freedom of expression and very little, if any, time was spent on the discussion of the scope of protection this right affords and ways in which this right can be exercised. <BR/>Footnotes don't conform to the standard of the Bluebook of Uniform Citation. <BR/><BR/>StanStan Staryginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00960159815221006813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6922161292779305181.post-81611250237367207112007-09-07T01:45:00.000-07:002007-09-07T01:45:00.000-07:00Hi Ravy!It is the good information you have put in...Hi Ravy!<BR/><BR/>It is the good information you have put in your topic, but I think you qouted too much from the original sources. The essay writting should come from your own ideas then raise example to support your answers, or you should qouted few word to support your answers.moen savoeunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07062153125718441078noreply@blogger.com